朗阁

小作文：表格 澳大利亚2000-2015年五种汽车的数量和占比的对比。。

　　大作文：

　　In many parts of the world, children have more freedom than they used to have. Is this a positive or negative development? (重复2017.07.08)

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试 难度中等

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1:表格 The table below shows the number of five kinds of registered vehicles in Australia in 2010 and 2015.

　　注意：

　　1、本次小作文难度较低，基础版动态图。

　　2、动态图，着重比较数据的变化趋势，注意时态由图片时间决定;

　　3、图表中的数据较多，注意数据变化的趋势归类。

　　重点表达：

　　There was a significant increase/ fall in …

　　…increased/dropped dramatically

　　The period between… and … experienced a significant rise/decline in…

　　… followed the similar pattern.

　　… showed a different pattern, with a drop/ growth from … to …

　　3.Task 2 ：教育类话题

　　题目翻译：如今*各地*获得了比过去更多的自由。这是积极还是消极的发展?

　　从话题上来说，这属于教育类话题。这是一道屡见不鲜的旧题，很多同学在准备的时候或许已经看过这道题目了，由此可见，在备考中，同学们对于典型的、经典的考题还是需要有一定的熟悉。相对而言，*教育类话题比较普遍，论证上可以考虑多运用举例;

　　从类型上来说，这篇考题属于利弊类讨论题。在审题中，同学们需要注意积极与消极两边需要分别讨论;

　　从结构上来说，考生们在写作时可以有自己的倾向性(利大于弊、弊大于利)皆可，分别对“更多自由对*成长的积极影响”、“更多自由对*成长的消极影响”进行探讨，此处给出一些可能的思路形式;

　　第二段：利

　　当*们获得更多自由，有利于培养他们的独立性和创造力favor them to foster independence and creativity。减少了父母对于*多方面的控制with reduced parental control in many aspects，*按照自己的意愿做出判断和选择make judgments and choices according to their own wishes，意味着他们被给予更多独立思考和探索的机会which means that they are given more opportunities to think and explore independently。例如在我的国家，现在的很多年轻父母允许他们3-1*的*自己决定艺术学习、运动项目等课程，允许*有自己的时间安排，尤其是在假期，并包容理解*在学校和家庭中出现的错误行为，没有过去父母那种一味地批评，而是更多引导和给予建议many young parents now allow their 3-15-year-old children to decide on art learning, sports and other courses by themselves and to have their own schedule, especially during the holidays, and tolerate their children's wrong behaviors at school and at home with more guidance and advice , instead of the parents' blind criticism in the past。确实，由于更多的自由导致了*自己独立面对和解决问题，在这个过程中*们对生活和工作都有了更积极的态度children have a more positive attitude towards life and work as more freedom leads children to face and solve problems independently.

　　第三段：弊

　　过度的自由很可能使*们过早地受到伤害。在这样小的年龄阶段，他们很难辨别是非，很容易被误导或者误入歧途 it is difficult for them to distinguish right from wrong, and it is easy to be misled or misguided。例如吸引*的活动往往使非常激烈而且相当暴力的电子游戏those activities that attract children are electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent，没有父母的监督，他们必然沉迷玩游戏而忽视学业Without parental supervision, they are bound to indulge in playing games, neglecting their studies。此外，在数字化时代，*们可以接触到网络上各种信息，他们也许就成为不恰当内容的受害者In the digital age, children have access to all kinds of information on the Internet, and they may fall victims to inappropriate content。然而，伴随着父母老师的监督和指导，*们会战胜那些挑战with the supervision and guidance of parents and teachers, children will overcome those challenges。

　　第四段：表明自己的立场和态度：更多的自由有利于*的身心成长。 It is more freedom that benefits children’s development physically and mentally.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：饼图等数据图仍然需要格外关注;流程图和地图也需要适当学习;

　　2.大作文：社会类考题仍然是关注的重点;其中科技和犯罪类话题需要多留意;