2025年4月12日雅思写作考试回顾

作者:jasmine老师来源:朗阁时间:2025-04-17 16:32:54

摘要:2025年4月12日雅思写作考试回顾

小作文:bar chart

  大作文:Advanced computer skills are a necessary factor for success in the workplace. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  朗阁讲师点评

  1.本次考试 难度简单

  2.整体分析:

  Task 1:

  根据考生回忆,这次的柱图展示了2009年和2010年欧洲不同国家在交通领域的燃料使用情况与欧盟平均水平的对比。

  可使用的表达:

  1. … recorded the highest fuel consumption at …, significantly exceeding any other country.

  2. … followed with …

  3. … lagged far behind of …

  4. The fuel usage of … increased steadily to …

  5. There was a marginal decline in the figure of …

  6. … witnessed a dramatic rise to …

  Task 2 :

  题目思路:

  Agree可考虑的写作方向:

  1. 在求职市场上(in the job market),拥有高级计算机技能往往是一个重要的加分项(is often a significant advantage)。许多公司(numerous companies),尤其是科技公司和大型企业(especially technology firms and large enterprises),会优先考虑那些具备高级编程能力、数据挖掘和分析能力的候选人(tend to prioritize candidates who possess advanced programming abilities, and data mining and analysis skills)。这些技能使得员工在众多求职者中脱颖而出(enable job seekers to stand out among candidates),增加获得理想工作的机会(increase their chances of securing ideal positions),进而更容易在职场中成功(thereby making it easier for them to achieve success in the workplace)。

  2. 高级计算机技能可以帮助员工更好地进行创新(help employees innovate more effectively),例如,在软件开发领域(in the field of software development),程序员可以开发出更高效、更智能的应用程序(programmers can create more efficient and intelligent applications)。当遇到复杂的工作问题时(When faced with complex work problems),具备高级计算机技能的员工也更有能力解决(are better equipped to solve them),例如,面对日益复杂的网络攻击(with network attacks becoming increasingly sophisticated),他们可以利用入侵检测系统和加密技术来防范和应对威胁(use intrusion detection systems and encryption technologies to prevent and respond to threats),*障企业的信息安全(safeguard the information security of the enterprises),这对于企业的发展和员工在职场中的地位都非常重要(which is crucial for the progress of the corporations and the positions of employees in the workplace)。

  Disagree可考虑的写作方向:

  1. 有些岗位对计算机技能要求不高(Some positions have low requirements for computer skills)。比如,传统的手工艺人(traditional craftsmen),他们工作的重点是精湛的手工技艺和对材料的理解(focus on their exquisite manual skills and understanding of materials)。再比如,酒店的客房服务员(hotel housekeepers),主要工作是清洁房间、为客人*服务等(the main tasks are cleaning rooms and providing services to guests)。在这些岗位上,高级计算机技能并不是成功的必要因素(are not a necessary factor for success)。

  2. 过分强调高级计算机技能可能会导致员工在其他重要技能方面发展不足(Overemphasizing advanced computer skills may lead to some employees failing to develop other essential skills)。比如,沟通能力、团队协作能力和**力等软技能在职场中同样重要(soft skills such as communication, teamwork and leadership are equally important in the workplace)。如果一个员工只专注于计算机技能的培养(focus solely on improving computer skills),可能会在团队合作中出现沟通不畅、无法有效**团队等问题(they are likely to encounter problems including poor communication and ineffective team leadership in collaborative projects)。

  考试建议

  1.小作文:线图、表格等数据图仍然要格外关注;流程图和地图也要适当学习。

  2.大作文:社会类考题仍然是关注的重点;科技和工作类话题也要多留意。



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